I honestly keep agreeing with your pitch, because I personally can relate! I think your pitch can use a little more kick into making me or whoever relate more. All the information you provided however can speak for itself as it was clear and straight to what you're providing. I also like how you mentioned how your service is different than the competitor's and how what you'll teach will be applied into the student's future life! Great work!
I honestly keep agreeing with your pitch, because I personally can relate! I think your pitch can use a little more kick into making me or whoever relate more. All the information you provided however can speak for itself as it was clear and straight to what you're providing. I also like how you mentioned how your service is different than the competitor's and how what you'll teach will be applied into the student's future life! Great work!
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