The feedback that I received was that I didn’t really move
that much in my post. I wasn’t being dynamic and engaging the audience. I think
this was important because I don’t want to bore the audience when I give a
pitch; I want to get them excited and motivated about my product. What surprised
me the most was that my friend said I looked really relaxed and not nervous. I always
feel like I look really nervous and uncomfortable when I record myself, but she
said that didn’t come across. The silliest feedback that I got was that the
camera was at a strange angle, and I should try to fix it.
This time was different because I was able to do my whole
pitch in one take. Usually I fumble over my words and have to redo the video
five times, but this time I got through it all at once.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your pitch and how concise it is. I think the availability of having different types of membership like hourly and even monthly rates is great since sometimes a monthly rate isn't worth it if you don't really like service and you only need it for specific chapters or exams. I also like how your voice is clear when presenting.
ReplyDeleteI think you gave a great pitch! Your speech is concise and detailed, and you did seem calm and casual while still maintaining the necessary professionalism. I think you maybe could be a bit more 'dynamic' in the sense of hand gestures or things like that, but I wouldn't go so far as to call you stiff or tense in your presentation style. I agree with Bianca that your voice was very clear and I personally didn't notice any fumbled words. Overall great job!
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