The feedback that I received was that I didn’t really move
that much in my post. I wasn’t being dynamic and engaging the audience. I think
this was important because I don’t want to bore the audience when I give a
pitch; I want to get them excited and motivated about my product. What surprised
me the most was that my friend said I looked really relaxed and not nervous. I always
feel like I look really nervous and uncomfortable when I record myself, but she
said that didn’t come across. The silliest feedback that I got was that the
camera was at a strange angle, and I should try to fix it.
This time was different because I was able to do my whole
pitch in one take. Usually I fumble over my words and have to redo the video
five times, but this time I got through it all at once.